And yes, I learned that it's easier to take photos when the train is not hurtling through a tunnel. Once we reached next station, I was able to get a clearer shot:
How should this have been handled? Take your pick:
- QC Pathfinder is the industry leader in infection control
- QC Pathfinder is the industry leader[comma] infection control
- QC Pathfinder is the industry-leading infection control
Copyeditor General's ruling: I hope their infection control solution is better than their copyediting. Otherwise it's Outbreak time.
4 comments:
I vote "QC Pathfinder is the industry leader in infection control"
Should probably alter that slogan to:-
Vecna Medical
Better Technology. Better World. We're working on Better Grammar.
Ha! Nice.
That, or:
Better technology. Better world. Better get someone to check our ad copy.
I'm voting for option #1, and your new slogan above - very funny :-)
Maybe I have a future as Snarkmeister General ...
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